Hello! Thank you for leaving a review like this :) Thank you for contacting me by email and for giving me your opinion like this~ I tried to write in detail while writing 144 pages~I will work on further refinement^^ Other buyers said it was too detailed~So I thought there was no need to go into more detail. I will send you the updated version by email when the update is done later!! :) I didn't know the word 'hibari' very well, so I looked it up, and it roughly means "force". I wrote that I wrote it with force, but since it was written for the purpose of explanation and guidance, it seems that it was difficult to feel the force. I will reflect the good opinion! Thank you^^